Bizarro Writer Favorite

these are what i’m changing in my story. instead of the rebellion winning the empire will take over a lawless galaxy. the story will have no love interests and the end will be with the empire winning.

There is a galaxy in which there is no law and only crime syndicates run what ever parts of civilization remain. But like a shining light through a cloud the empire would restore the justice and peace to the lawless galaxy. ” Rear Admiral Justone, we are approaching them” said the captain of the dreadnought class star destroyer. “Thank you.” Justone said. He was raised as a orphan on a planet that was big on child slavery. when he had gotten older he joined the empire. It was a new thing to the galaxy. A long time ago there was an empire but it had fallen to a rebellion led by a knight that followed the ways of the old republic. But that was a very long time ago. Now there was a new ray of light for the galaxy, the empire. it was a very young, new and optimistic idea. People hadn’t formed an opinion about the empire yet. But still, even thought the Empire was young they acted with calm and swiftness. quickly getting planets to side with them in their effort to get the galaxy to be peaceful under one rule. “Ready the landing crafts!” the Rear Admiral said. “Yes Sir!” said one of the officers. They were planning on capturing the headquarters of one of the biggest crime syndicates that kept causing trouble for the Empire. The way the empire worked was not of a iron fist, but with a rule made of the people that were in the empire. Using force was not a big part of their goal, however, if they needed to they could end a conflict quickly and with little friendly casualties. and they were going to use the swiftness against this headquarters. ” Fire the first warning shot!!”