these are what i’m changing in my story. instead of the rebellion winning the empire will take over a lawless galaxy. the story will have no love interests and the end will be with the empire winning.

There is a galaxy in which there is no law and only crime syndicates run what ever parts of civilization remain. But like a shining light through a cloud the empire would restore the justice and peace to the lawless galaxy. ” Rear Admiral Justone, we are approaching them” said the captain of the dreadnought class star destroyer. “Thank you.” Justone said. He was raised as a orphan on a planet that was big on child slavery. when he had gotten older he joined the empire. It was a new thing to the galaxy. A long time ago there was an empire but it had fallen to a rebellion led by a knight that followed the ways of the old republic. But that was a very long time ago. Now there was a new ray of light for the galaxy, the empire. it was a very young, new and optimistic idea. People hadn’t formed an opinion about the empire yet. But still, even thought the Empire was young they acted with calm and swiftness. quickly getting planets to side with them in their effort to get the galaxy to be peaceful under one rule. “Ready the landing crafts!” the Rear Admiral said. “Yes Sir!” said one of the officers. They were planning on capturing the headquarters of one of the biggest crime syndicates that kept causing trouble for the Empire. The way the empire worked was not of a iron fist, but with a rule made of the people that were in the empire. Using force was not a big part of their goal, however, if they needed to they could end a conflict quickly and with little friendly casualties. and they were going to use the swiftness against this headquarters. ” Fire the first warning shot!!”

the piece that i personally love from chuck wendig is Star Wars. I just love this piece as it shows the way star wars is really fun to read about. it goes into good detail about what the story is about.

I really like my writer just because he writes about star wars, and i personally love star wars. he doesn’t have a specific style of writing but he writes about star wars sooo… He is also one of the few writers that have their work cannon by Disney in the star wars universe. This and the fact that he is a good writer that has good ways to out the scenes into words. it would be hard for me to create this as star wars is not an easy thing to write about and it sounds good. yet Chuck is able to do this well.

So far in the book has been interesting to say the least, we talk about the confusion of the babies and how they end up getting mixed. that was funny to see played out. they also describe the Antichrist in a very interesting way “He stared down at the golden curls of the Adversary, Destroyer of Kings, Angel of the Bottomless Pit, Great Beast that is called Dragon, Prince of This World, Father of Lies, Spawn of Satan, and Lord of Darkness.” Seeing this is very cool though as it somewhat foreshadows how the book is going to play out. Also they point out the four horsemen, they just kinda appear and the end of the world starts. Also Pestilence retired and pollution took its place. Adam also begins to use his power, Adam was able to slightly influence the weather in Tadfield, the town in which he lives. this is very interesting.

there are some major differences between the book and the movie that we watched. they way they described war is very different. one described it as a necessary evil that must be taken apart of in order to control what happens to one in the other book the way they describe war is a ominous entity that one can only hope and pray that it goes away. A scene that shows how they think of war in the book i read was that when the main character was talking to the one he was falling for about what he thinks of war at the hospital. another would be when he is talking to the priest of the town and the discuss the war. in the book hiding place they talk about the Nazi invasion of Holland, and the last would be when peter is arrested for playing the national anthem in the church, this shows what they think if the war.

I think this semester writing might be a interesting one, however it might be hard to write in the style of ones author as different people still have to write the same for people to understand what they are trying to get across. if I could change the project I would make it less to do with writing in their style to more studding them. this might be a fun project but there will definitely be some parts of the project that will be bumps but it should be easy to get past those.

when I was 2 I had gone with my parent to target. they were at the checkout line waiting. I was playing around nearby, I had seen some of the handicap electric chair/scooters. Parents had thought that maybe i shouldn’t be on them, but came to the conclusion that i couldn’t turn them on and it was safe as we were about to leave. They were wrong. i had somehow found a way to turn one on. Then i started driving it around the store. Bit skeptical? I have no proof but my words. I had managed to drive around the store for about a min before my dad stopped me. a very eventful story to say the least. Now imagine instead of me it was a teen who had just got his license. And instead of a handicap electric scooter/chairs it was a car. now imagine if instead of my dad stopping me no one stops the teen, but actually encourages him to drive fast. This is a common scenario though.you way think what’s so wrong with this? However every day 9 teens die from fatal car crashes. all could be avoided by driving safely.

Had really no point with this but had to write so i wrote this. Thanks for reading and have a beautiful day!

so i personally love cars! me and me and my dad always work on his 1969 corvette. we have had this cars for about 2 years and there always something new wrong with it. But that’s what you get when you have a car over 50 years old. We know this car like the back of our hands, or so we thought. One day while we were working near the fuel tank we heard a clicking. thought it was weird so we investigated it. saw absolutely nothing so dismissed it. About a week later the car started leaking gas from the tank. We then decided to take the car to a car shop to lift the car up and to see what was wrong. the night before we took it to the the car shop we heard the clicking again, and there was a puddle of gas under the corvette. when we looked at the spot where the clicking was coming from and then we saw it. the clicking was a spark plug that was meant to create a fire!! Me and my dad both jump out of the garage just as the corvette went up in flames! we both stared as half the car was burnt down in a mater of mere seconds then… Boom!!! the car blew up in a massive fireball. at the time we didn’t know but the explosion had hit the neighborhood propane tank winch ignited and several square mile just instantly ignited with flames with explosions everywhere! It was devastating, and how this story ends.

Thanks for reading and have a beautiful day!

I don’t know what i just made…

The day is winding down and the sun is starting to set. Our main character is the small one over there. he is a midget and is 3 3/4 feet tall. He loves to use is height to his advantage as he does the most devilish things to the people who live in his town. he especially love for some reason to kick taller people and then run away. no reason at all. and is name is Murk. Why? That’s the sound he makes when he kick the people.

Murk- Ha! You again have fallen for my trick! MURK!!

random- No!! give me my children back!

Murk- You call ice cream children? How sad!

Murk proceeds to steal the mans ice cream whilst the man sobs in fear.

Murk- No i will sail with my ice cream to France were i will live the rest of my days!

Police- Stop! You have violated the law! For such thy will be punished to 2 years in prison or until death!

Murk- Nah, I’ll pass. Thanks though.

Police- OK, have a good day then!

With Murk now at the port where he plans to board a boat to France the Deity of Baguettes appears in front of Murk and a with a thunderous boom, he says

Baguette Deity- You have sinned greatly by stealing the mans ice cream! for such they will face me!

Murk- Oh shoot!!! Gotta blast!

The Baguette Deity proceeds to chase Murk down. While a giant crab appears! he challenges the deity to a battle the winner get a free happy meal, and the others soul!!!

Murk- yes i have escaped!

Murk then proceeded to live the next 40 years stealing ice cream. we nver found out who won the battle be legend say the baguette god got wet in the water and started to disintegrate.

Well that’s the end of that so thanks for reading and have a beautiful day!

Release

Understand the harrowing defeat

Frozen faces all around me

In timeless agony

At peace

Observe death’s straining grip around us all

Reaper’s curse keeps following me

In death we all will see

Come to know the suffering

Of those who can’t fly

Feel the energy in their cries

From down below

All gone

The bodycount will never stop growing

Burning flags all I can see

As armies still march on

A pawn

In the game they play is all I am

Castaway into the sea

Of bodies all around

Speak up against the pain

And it is all you will receive

No rest for the wicked

But there is no rest for me

Fight back against the power

And it will only beat you down

No thanks for the martyrs 

Of a dying cause

Come to know the suffering

Of those who can’t fly

Feel the energy in their cries

From down below

Cool that a thing

I am a seagull. Basic. I like fish and water. Sand is nice as well. When I hatched from my egg my first thought was:”Hungry. Hungry? Hungry. HUNGRY!!!” Ever since then i have always thought about food. Other than food little other thoughts cross my mind. I’ve seen this other seagull. He tries to fly really fast but. I mean I’ve thought about water but foods in water so… I see other birds on the beach a lot but it looks like they don’t want fish. They get those little squirmy things on the ground and those hard shells that the waves bring in. but fish are where its at. They are the best food on the beach. However when rains come the small fish disappear and are replaced by the big fish. Far too large for any seagull to catch. In that case I guess squirmy things are fine. Most of the time I’m looking for a good looking fish that’s not too big but not too small. I’m sorry, I keep talking about food. Speaking of witch ya got any? No? OK. Any ways that’s my life. Do I got any hopes and dreams? Sure I do! They consist of food! There’s not much else for a seagull to achieve in life. Well, I got to go get some food. See ya!